Determined 'till death
To find her own way in life
Unfailing herself

-Here you have shown that failing is
not an option for you

With so much to show
She looks into the mirror
With her face aglow

-This stanza depicts that there
is more than meets the eye

They told you, you can't
But you are sure that you can
Don't listen to them

-I love the determination that you have
but real friends are those who let you
spread out your wings and fly

Let them challenge you
You'll win as you always do
Eyes open and see

-hurdles are not obstruction but
just challenges from your point of view

She is born to fly
Her feet unchained will leave ground
She will reach the sky

-I love they way you end it and yes
you will reach the sky

Overall i love the poem, It gives a very
meaningful insight of how a determine person
thinks.After reading it, i get the feeling that
there is no limit on how high i can go.
Wonderful Job;)

Omg.What a wonderful poem sasha.It was absloutly fantastic and I really loved your soul of bravery,determenation and challenge just keep your self always determained because life needs a strong faithful human and Allah is always there for us.Wish I was strong as you are...

Well done,keep it up...5\5...

Always distinguished 5/5

Wow. I really love how you described yourself as a person who CAN.
This poem is really uplifting and im sure it would be good to read whenever you are feeling down.
They told you, you can't
But you are sure that you can
Don't listen to them
^^ This shows an inner strength. A strength that will never die out.

She is born to fly
Her feet unchained will leave ground
She will reach the sky
^^ This is just a really cute last stanza. It is positive and optimistic and I am sure, whatever it is you would like to do, whether it be touching the sky, you will accomplish it :]

Awesome poem.
5/5