A Mistake

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Dec 31, 2008


The day before you met me
How sweet does that sound?
How good does the world seem
If I wasn't around?
Would it be so much better?
Would it make the pain go away?
I could find a cliff to dive off
If I didn't have so much to say

Really, all I'd say
Is you mean so much to me
If I'm a mistake that you'd take back
Then that's all I'll ever be
A mistake.

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  • 15 years ago

    by ShAnEL

    WoW thats really deep made me cry

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    "Then that's all I'll ever be
    A mistake."
    [ Then that's all the mistake
    I'll ever be] ????
    - I think that sounds better. Maybe not broken up like that but overall.

    Good poem. I enjoyed how you pieced it together.

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    I don't likeit.

    5/5

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