Comments : On The Lonely Side Of The Night

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Deana, this is so beautifully penned ... and so touching ... the first stanza itself speaks so much... beautiful write...

    keep write..

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Deana,

    This is so different from you..You are usually cheerful and your poems lighter than this...but I loved it anyway because even at the sad poems you excell:)

    Have a great 2009!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Your words always seem to flow so easily and powerfully. Very well done!
    Take care, Eleni

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    Well dones. You have some really nice couilets/imagery going on here.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Congrats on the win!

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    I liked how it rhymed but i had some trouble understanding what is was about

    4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ben thompson

    AN OUTSTANDING WRITE. PERFECT FLOW, PAINTS A BEAUTIFUL PICTURE OF SADNESS. 5/5 FROM ME. ALL THE BEST BEN THOMPSON