Comments : Hands of time ( Retourne)

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow Ingrid you have beautifully crafted this poem til perfection.The metaphors that you used really enables me to read between the lines.This poem was such a delightful to read as it has a stong visualization written within it.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Now this si conform with the french poetry style ,but thsi is not rhyming althought it is not suppose to be ,

    i liked the words but you used some hard ones even for me abit it enrich the poem but make it a bit hard to understand ,

    2 things rhyme and easier words and expression

  • 15 years ago

    by Joselyne

    I like This poem a lot all I got to say is good job but plz check out my poems and polz comment :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    This was a really well written poem, it fitted the form very well and your opening line was amazing.
    Thoughts like old rags caught on barb wire

    This is a line that i will remember for a long time to come.. it was truely fascinating and it shows great imagination.
    Overall your poem was really great and i enjoyed reading it.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Krista

    This was very interesting Ingrid! I enjoyed reading it. The form was unique also. A good read. The only thing I noticed was there wasn't any periods or commas, other than that, I loved it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully Done Ingrid!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Wow! Some great lines in this one Ingrid!

    'Thoughts like old rags caught on barbed wire
    Floating on fading memories'

    Wish I could of used those ones!, and the rest also.

    Nicely penned Ingrid!

    • 9 years ago

      by Ingrid

      It is so nice you are reading through my old stuff, Peter :)

      Thank you soooo much for all the great comments! xx