by Poetic Grunt Dec 31, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
We walk the streets in a formation or line |
by X Harlea X
I liked this poem Chris. It was really amazing. ((5)) |
by Teria
We are = We're. You've accidently put 'were' instead of 'we're' a few times. |
***We'll die once at the enemies hand, and we'll die again for the American man |
Hey this is a nice poem. so emotive and deep |