Why no one - especially other club members - haven't commented on this, I don't know. This is a really nice poem with (for the most part) good metre and subtle rhymes.

"You've always been with me"... That's the line I'm not so sure about. If you use the full English of "You have always been with me" it seems to flow with the following line much more easily without taking on a formal tone.

A very warm and pleasing read after a tough week. :-)