by Cara Jan 1, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
You try to get the words out to tell me how you feel |
by PoetryKnight
Wicked awsome poem, keep up the great work. lol. 5/5 |
by Steven Topaz
Flawless poem only sketchy thing is the very last line it feels like A: a let down from the rest of the poem picking it up and it wasnt the ending i was hoping for and B: the flow is broken in the last line but I guess that's ok because it is the last line, it was a VERY good poem, I only like poems that acutaly hit my heart this is one of them, favorited. |
by Mister 47
Tears are actulay screams that the heart make you hear |
Wow , this is just an excellent poem, Wow i loved it |
by Anthony
Awesome!!! lol i dont deal with all that smart word stuff.. i could but i dont wanna.. lol just wanna tell u i love this poem =D |