Awww this is beautiful! The rhyming was very well put and the spelling and grammer wonderful! Great message by the way, life can be great, even when life is at its worst, be optimistic. I hope you win! |
Words Selective .. I like that 5/5 |
Again well written tears facinate me and i also wrote a poem a while ago called tears, and what i think about them. This poem was interesting in as much as tou mention tears speaking words, and it is so true , tears can be such an expressive thing i think you got the general message of your poem across very well |
by Anthony
Awesome!!! lol i dont deal with all that smart word stuff.. i could but i dont wanna.. lol just wanna tell u i love this poem =D |
Wow , this is just an excellent poem, Wow i loved it |
by Mister 47
Tears are actulay screams that the heart make you hear |
by Steven Topaz
Flawless poem only sketchy thing is the very last line it feels like A: a let down from the rest of the poem picking it up and it wasnt the ending i was hoping for and B: the flow is broken in the last line but I guess that's ok because it is the last line, it was a VERY good poem, I only like poems that acutaly hit my heart this is one of them, favorited. |
by PoetryKnight
Wicked awsome poem, keep up the great work. lol. 5/5 |