Very nicely written Cara, a lovely poem writtem at the perfect moment in time, a time for reflection. It was like a freeze frame in time well done. I hope you achieve all your goals for the new year , well done

Well done.. I like it very much.. Keep it up 5/5

Wow Excellent
Time needs a remote control, with a stop, rewind and pause
Then I wouldn't miss anything and I could fix my many flaws
Is it only me who fears what the future may hold?
Time moves on and it is unknown what will unfold

Wonderful, favourite stanza =]

What a great way to start the new year! Your rhyming was great and I really enjoyed reading it!I loved how you expressed your fear of the future and how as time moves on its unknown what will happen. These are truely wise words and a smart way of looking over the past as we move into the future. Happy New Year! 5/5

I loved this. The only problem I had reading it was that I felt as though the last stanza didn't quite fit. Or, not necessarily fit, but flowed. You have great rhymes throughout the rest of the poem, and then you reach the last stanza and it doesn't read the same way. It was a really good poem though. 5/5 Oh, and thanks for your comment on "Souvenirs." It was greatly appreciated.

You are right to live your day to the fully second and live happy

every minute you live sad is a minute you wont get back^__^

i like the simplicuty and the deepness of this piece it seem soo easy from you to express this one and from the flow !! it si wonderfull

great one i enjoy it and i support every word in it and i hope we can all live the wya you are going to to

"Click" lol. you know, when I graduated, life seemed to fly by faster than ever. christmas came by like super fast. lol 5/5