by Ellie
I like this poem but it doesn't seem like your usual writing style. I love the content though it's reallly good. |
I read this twice , very short but with the most powerful of words. A positive look to the coming of sunrise basically , Great job and thought provoking |
by oddi tea
AMAZING! Perfect rhymes, Just...I am left speechless! I love the way you sum it all up at the very end in hope and you begin the poem in a darker mood. WONDERFUL!! SOOO a 5/5! |
by Cara
I thought this was a very good piece :] |
by Faithless
Wow this poem certainly makes sense.I like how you used the weather as metaphor to bring your message across. Well in this life thing doesn't really always go our ways... you we must learn to accpet te cold hard truth. I think you have penned down a beautifully crafted piece |
by Blissful
The truth behind this poem was filled with so much power and meaning. It was short and to the point without excess words which was great. Great message behind it and overall a great write. Congrats on the win! Well deserved. |