How very beautiful Kelleyana,

This is the very fist poem I am reading in 2009! I think you have a good change at winning the contest with it:)
You are very good at formatted poetry as well, I would like to see more of those by you:)

The very best wishes for 2009 and a big hug,

5/5 Ingrid

Kelly my friend this was just wonderful. A difficult form that you turned into beauty. Good luck in the contest. and Happy new year dear friend

What a beautiful poem :]
You wrote the poem in a very difficult form and still made it absolutely brilliant.
A contest winner for sure!
You really uplifted my spirits with this poem so thankyou.
Definitely a 5/5 from me :]
Keep up the great work!

This poem gives me a very romantic relaxing mood...by the beach where my mind is in a state of peace.You have done a wonderful in penning down your imagination.

Ocean of dreams is all I see
place to escape from reality
Magical thoughts flowing off mind
Freedom from external control.

^^ I love this stanza...It is a beautiful /magical opening;)

Excellent Job and all the best for the contest
5/5 from me

Hey Kelly,

Congrats. I had told you. You are a genius. You have a good chance of winning the contest. Very nicely written. And thanx for making me expertised in Retourne.

Very beautigful write... i haven't tried this form but after reading yours I will surely try it...

"Ocean of dreams is all I see
place to escape from reality"

^^beautifully penned... dream is a place where we let ourselves free... let our imaginations run wild... and sometimes turn those dreams into reality... these lines display the cheerfulness that I feel when Im in my dreamland ;)

"Freedom from external control
Is what I crave for in my life
Only commander being myself
Thus being architect of my fate."

^^ I found the last lines very motivating ... commander of our fate and architect of our destiny... wonderful lines...

very enjoyable read :)

Wonderfully Done, A Well Done Retourne!!!

I really loved the title and you expressed it very well. Your words were very beautiful and this poem was flawless. I reread it a few times because it really has this magical feeling that made me feel happy when reading it . I am adding it to my faves too. great job 5/5

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