I Feel.

by iFallToPieces   Jan 1, 2009


I feel as if I am flying,
I feel as if I am free,
I feel as if a weight,
Has lifted from me.

I suddenly feel so vibrant,
I suddenly feel relieved,
I feel as if i am floating,
On things I never believed.

I did not think that telling you,
Would make me feel this way.
I did not think that telling you,
Would help me out today.

I am not afraid to see you,
I am not afraid to talk,
Finally I feel alive,
It is like I have learnt to walk.

I guess it is going to take,
One step at a time.
So baby lets not make,
The same mistake again.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    This was a very good write. the way you used repetition in the first stanza actually worked, sometimes repetition i really just dont like, but yours was good.
    I like how your poem was a happy love poem.. we dont see many of those around.
    so keep up the great work :]