Comments : Cross Crescent Candle

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Oh, I so loved this!
    You are rapidly becoming a superstar on this site, Azzza:)
    I loved the words, the rhyme, the metaphors..it just painted a picture and rendered a message very strong.

    Chapeau, my friend!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I agree with the other two, it was fantastic. I also am a bit speechless, it was totally terrific. This line really stood out to me:
    'Cascading tears innocence lost'

    Keep up the great work! this poem was amazing. The flow, the rhyme.. everything. Awesome, awesome work!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    The bloodiest battle were waged in the name of religion. You penned a perfect piece, It carried so much emotion for me. Thank you, for a wonderful poem the first one I read this year.

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love youwotding and rhyme scheme and the mystical tove in this poem

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Azzza, this poem was one of your best! It is very mysterious and has obviously attracted alot of attention. I am proud of you! Great Job. It is flawless and very meaningful. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    I love the way this poem is rather mysterious, its very interesting, a great piece of work.
    Well done

  • 15 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    Wow is all i ca say that was amazing. this poem is so beautiful.
    5/5 from me :)

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    "Cascading tears innocence lost
    Priceless gems pays heavy cost
    Middle fence powerless to enforce
    repetitious cycle or run from course.", Azzza, this touches the dept of my soul. Such powerful words that i can relates to just by listening the news all the time. Your poems are excellent these days. I can feel an increase of happiness in your 'world'. Very well done my friend, 5/5, love it, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by StarGirl

    I didn't understand this poem except something about religion. I read it over and over again, even aloud. I think everything flows beautiful tho but I really don't want to rate it yet, till I can understand it. If it's not too much trouble maybe you could email me about it because I love poetry but I don't always understand it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal

    This is nice i really liked it :) strong imagery :) x

  • 15 years ago

    by Aimz

    I totally understood this poem and your meanings behind the words. It flows brilliantly. I only wish I could write like this!
    Fantastic work.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really enjoyed the alliteration in this piece
    The imagery was well done and I loved it. My favorite line was
    "Cascading tears innocence lost"
    This just spoke to me in so many ways
    let me tell you you have a way with words
    kaila
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    Hello ! I've gotta say ! it is the most amazing ending i've ever seen ! the way you've written the poem and the way you moved from issue to another is perfectly amazing! Keep it up! you'll be a great poet 1 day!... 5/5 !

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    I love it! Wow... It's AMAZING! Seriously, it left me speechless. It's so powerful and has great emotion!!! I love it!!!! Excellent job!! I can't unerstand why you have 4.9 rating for this poem.
    5/5

    Soda.

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This one is sad but really good. u need to cheer up!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    I love your rhyming in this one. It flows really well.
    Great job. :) And thanks for the comment.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Interesting poem. Joe reccomended it to me because I was questioning my religion.

    Good job.