by Ingrid
Oh, I so loved this! |
by Cara
I agree with the other two, it was fantastic. I also am a bit speechless, it was totally terrific. This line really stood out to me: |
The bloodiest battle were waged in the name of religion. You penned a perfect piece, It carried so much emotion for me. Thank you, for a wonderful poem the first one I read this year. |
I love youwotding and rhyme scheme and the mystical tove in this poem |
by SashaMirage
Azzza, this poem was one of your best! It is very mysterious and has obviously attracted alot of attention. I am proud of you! Great Job. It is flawless and very meaningful. 5/5 |
I love the way this poem is rather mysterious, its very interesting, a great piece of work. |
Wow is all i ca say that was amazing. this poem is so beautiful. |
by kelleyana
"Cascading tears innocence lost |
by StarGirl
I didn't understand this poem except something about religion. I read it over and over again, even aloud. I think everything flows beautiful tho but I really don't want to rate it yet, till I can understand it. If it's not too much trouble maybe you could email me about it because I love poetry but I don't always understand it. |
by Crystal
This is nice i really liked it :) strong imagery :) x |
by Aimz
I totally understood this poem and your meanings behind the words. It flows brilliantly. I only wish I could write like this! |
by Kaila
I really enjoyed the alliteration in this piece |
by SweetGrief
Hello ! I've gotta say ! it is the most amazing ending i've ever seen ! the way you've written the poem and the way you moved from issue to another is perfectly amazing! Keep it up! you'll be a great poet 1 day!... 5/5 ! |
by Not Enough
I love it! Wow... It's AMAZING! Seriously, it left me speechless. It's so powerful and has great emotion!!! I love it!!!! Excellent job!! I can't unerstand why you have 4.9 rating for this poem. |
by Good Enough
This one is sad but really good. u need to cheer up!! 5/5 |
by Katie
I love your rhyming in this one. It flows really well. |
Interesting poem. Joe reccomended it to me because I was questioning my religion. |