I think of Him often and how he died and of how worthless we are, us humans..we still go on killing eachother and treating each other with so much disrespect.

I loved this poem, it shows so much dedication to our Lord, bravo:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Good job. You really do writer good poems. Keep working hard. And write more.

Well well done. What a great poem you have here. I'm not sure what else I can say here, your emotions stood out very clearly to us, and I thought your flow was intact and didnt fall apart at all. Impressive piece, especially that you used a form as well.

Well done.
5/5.
Keep up the great work.

Wow, you learn something new every day. lol. great poem. there is a song that say, he could have called ten thousand angels, really, he could have called more, but, you know. lol. 5/5 poem