Awesome poem!!

5/5

it's amazing, what chuu talkin bout!

"Leaving me with a gushing hole"

Wow. this was good! Except this line.. ^^ Idk why.. i just didn't like the word "gushing" maybe change it to something less.. i don't know. It just didn't seem to fit in my opinion. Other then that, AMAZING! :D

I actually liked it =)

it's proberbly better than what I could ever do!

keep up the good work,
Coz I love reading it =)

take care
renee
xx