Look what he's done

by Jessie   Jan 2, 2009


The crystals of pain
fall down on her skin
just like a voodoo doll
in goes another pin

He has no idea
with the pain he has dealt
he will never know
just how she felt

the scars will fade
but the pain will stay
she hides in herself
as her eyes scream ' go away'

look closely now
at how broken she's become
some people wonder
where the pain came from

but with simple words
He says he's fine
she will think to herself
' look whats lost, he was once mine'

The pain wont fade
it will only increase
she will turn to her music
where she might find peace

but her crystal rain
fall's as hard as she did
for a boy
who she had forbid

he closed her eyes
forever more
hes rotted her down
straight to the core

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  • 15 years ago

    by Alicia

    Very nice read, you expressed your emotions extremely well!
    If I might recommend one thing,

    "but her crystal rain
    fall's as hard as she did
    for a boy
    who she had forbid"

    This stanza is a little choppy, maybe you could try and add a few words to make it flow just a little better.
    But still amazing work!
    5/5