CHECK OUT THAT GIRL

by FindingHarmonyInYurCries   Jan 2, 2009


Check out that girl,
Pretty smile, high skirt.
Everything a guy wants,
Make up, short shirt.

Check out that girl,
Pretty pale, clear skin.
Everything a guy wants,
Perfect hair with bobby pins.

Check out that girl,
High heels, nice ass.
Everything a guy wants,
Long nails like glass.

Check out that girl,
Nice legs, perfect walk,
Everything a guy wants,
Plump lips, perfect talk.

Check out that girl,
Popular, kissed a lot.
Everything a guy wants,
Everything I'm not.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    Wow;
    great work my darling.

    i'm not gonna say i understand,
    but i can see where you are coming from.
    =)

    keep it up
    5/5
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Okay, VERY strong poem. I like the repition used to emphasize your point. The depressing end was kind of a shock though. The rhyming was amazing, it didnt seem forced at all. Amazing work, 5/5.

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