Graveyard scene

Thanks for the explanation Grant. Certain words are just unkown to me and therefore I misunderstood the message of the whole poem:)

You know Grant,

I have read this poem many times and it is not written by the kind man I know.
I suppose you have some way to justify what you wrote and people who commented to it enjoyed it because they don't know whom it is written for.
Some "killings" are fun when all parties agree the verdict was right. But you know, my friend..so many people in this world are slaughtered like animals or put to death after years in death row and many years later they find out by using dna samples that they were innocent after all.
You should take a look inside and ask yourself what made you write this.
I have been hurt deeply so many times, but on my account you will find no poems that are aggressive, they only express the hurt I felt. We are all human Grant, with our flaws and virtues. Only God is perfect.

Ingrid

*Shivers* nice poem, you got the graveyard scene allright, that was so cold I felt a chill through my spine... well done! 5/5

Wow... like i really mean WOW!!! you have always had such an amazing and really unique style with such a stunning way of describing things. You can take really dark topics and through your words make them beautiful in their own dark way. a truly outstanding job, keep up the amazing work!!

This was simply beautifull.. the word were perfect and the flow was amazing...

5.5