A Heart I Can Not Mend

by iFallToPieces   Jan 2, 2009


I am thinking of a way,
To forget your face.
I am thinking of a way,
So I can leave this place.

I am thinking,
How do I erase the pain that I feel inside?
Maybe,
The best way would be if I finally died.

So I sit here in my room,
The blood runs down my arm,
Why would you care,
If I caused myself some harm.

The pain it feels much better,
Then having an ache in my heart,
Who would have thought,
You could still tear me apart.

Thinking hard and long,
For what could be so wrong,
When people think I am strong,
Soon I will be where I belong.

The blade then slices down,
I think it went too deep,
Soon I will not be around
And you will not hear me weep.

The blood is coming fast,
It is finally the end.
Now I will not have to live,
With a heart i can not mend.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow hun.. no guy is worth your pain. No guy is worth your tears and NO guy is worth your blood. Self harm may seem like the way out.. and it may seem like it doesnt hurt as much as heart break.. but hurting yourself because of a guy is letting them win. We cant have that now, can we? lol.
    The poem was really well written, you really painted a horrible picture in my mind.
    5/5
    and remember hun, you arent alone :] When it feels like the blade is the only friend you have.. look again. Because ill always be here :]

  • 15 years ago

    by ImStillInLoveWithYou

    I think the person below me is right, I hope this isn’t a real story because I do the same thing and I know what you are goin through. I can relate to this poem in so many different ways and I love it. Great job. 5/5 <33

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    This poem is filled with so much emotions, right from the start to the finish. I can feel the pain that you are goin through.

    The blade then slices down,
    I think it went too deep,
    Soon I will not be around
    And you will not hear me weep.

    ^^ This stanza really gives me the chills
    i can just envision the blood gushing out.

    Overall i think it was well written. I just hope that this is a fictional story and not what you did in real life. Cause your life is precious to be wasted on a person who has broke ur heart.Excellent job for the poem5/5

    Take Care
    -Azzza

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