This poem is filled with so much emotions, right from the start to the finish. I can feel the pain that you are goin through.

The blade then slices down,
I think it went too deep,
Soon I will not be around
And you will not hear me weep.

^^ This stanza really gives me the chills
i can just envision the blood gushing out.

Overall i think it was well written. I just hope that this is a fictional story and not what you did in real life. Cause your life is precious to be wasted on a person who has broke ur heart.Excellent job for the poem5/5

Take Care
-Azzza

I think the person below me is right, I hope this isn’t a real story because I do the same thing and I know what you are goin through. I can relate to this poem in so many different ways and I love it. Great job. 5/5 <33

Wow hun.. no guy is worth your pain. No guy is worth your tears and NO guy is worth your blood. Self harm may seem like the way out.. and it may seem like it doesnt hurt as much as heart break.. but hurting yourself because of a guy is letting them win. We cant have that now, can we? lol.
The poem was really well written, you really painted a horrible picture in my mind.
5/5
and remember hun, you arent alone :] When it feels like the blade is the only friend you have.. look again. Because ill always be here :]