Empty

by leticia miller   Jan 3, 2009


I think the title says it all no words can explain the feeling
how can you describe an empty box
its like opening a beautiful Christmas present nothing inside
no joy no laughter
day by day the lights start to dem
when you thought you could not get any closer to the edge without falling over
someone pushes you and you get closer
just thinking to your self why let people push you closer
why not just jump instead of going thought all the paper work
like a long line your three people away and yet it still takes forever
your day consist of your daily smack to the ground
after that you are no longer in control like a blank note pad
like a puppet they dont control their own movement
if it were not for the hand inside
they would be EMPTY

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This piece is just overflowing with intense emotions. I can really relate to what you're saying. Such a deep ann personal piece. You express yourself well. Keep it up. Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by Valeria

    I really liked this poem
    it's so easy to understand
    great poem:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Valeria

    I really liked this poem
    it's so easy to understand
    great poem:)