by Courageous Dreamer Jan 3, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
`Written for a title contest. |
Ahhh when I saw the title, I knew it'd be really in depth about feelings. Your poem has amazing imagery, and love the fact you link both tears and the heart together. |
by mzlovehate
This is so true. I really like the title; that's what caught my attention. I haven't been having the best week:I had to cry, and I cried the words of this poem but I guess it wasn't meant for me to write but read them; thanks, you did a better job than I probably could have done. |
This poem was very well written!! i love the line "A forlorn heart left speechless suffering intense pain from heartache, |
by Hollymariee
There's a lot of repetition in here .. Maybe try to find better words ? Even though it doesn't rhyme , there's still a flow to it which really helps along the read . I really like the puzzle piece imagery , it's probably my favorite part . I don't really have much more to say .. You're a better writter than I am lol . 5/5 |
by KemistryKia
Loved it continue to write |