Awww this is really sad indeed.I can feel the longing for you to be with him again. THere is no doubt that you really like this person a lot but somehow his eyes are blind, not being able to see that the person who loves him more than anything else, is the person standing right in front of him.I love the way u end it.

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

Aww.. its sad and loving in a way.. i like that. i love your flow at points and the word choice great job...

5.5