by Rolo Jan 3, 2009
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Petals of deep red and velvet mature together and concealed |
by umbra
This poem did so much to personify the majority of the human condition. You have related so much emotion and thought using a non-corporeal object! When I need help to personify I shall ask you the master. I like that you chose to show light and dark aspects to life. Everything in life seeks balance, and it seems you have found it. |
A rose; so much like us human beings. No matter our struggles to thrive, we seem to fall apart anyway. A perfect way to describe us, and I like your choice of structure. It suits the topic better than an average poem. You are a beautiful Rose, my friend. I could never forget the kindness you gave me, and I wish I could have only been a better friend in return. You will always be a part of my life, and a source of my recovery from many years past. Thank you. |