by Steven Topaz Jan 3, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
And here i lay dreaming, |
by Cara
I agree, the title really made me curious and thats why i decided to read this one. I thought it was very clever. The poem itself was very good and the rhyme and flow were good too. I liked the simplicity.. :] |
by oddi tea
I love how you give the descriptive words "rock" and "throne" in the title to make the reader wonder. But then wait until halfway through the poem to actually encorperate it in. And at the very end, how you finally describe what you meant, it was wonderful and held my attention the whole way through. Great job. 5/5 |