Comments : My love and death

  • 15 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Wow, this is great. I love the imagery and the ironic parallels in this poem.

    "He took everything from me
    My family, my love, my life
    Now it is he who will know
    The feeling of this knife"

    Very strong, very thought-provoking, very sad. Great job, 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by firexflys

    Very sad story.. i loved it though.. everything you wrote played off of eachother.. you flow was good your word choice... great job 5.5