Dear CJ,

If I had a man in my life that wrote me this, I would be in the next plane to be with him forever.
I read it and just went OMG...so very beauitful. there is something in the way you write, I cannot explain...you have a very sensitive and caring heart and it shines trough all of your words!
Outstanding piece of love and evotion:)))

*big hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

It seems the downvoting fairy visited you, my dear friend.
don't let it distract you, your poems kick ass;)

CJ, this is absolutely beautiful. Remember that not only dart do pierce, but words also, it even hurts more. I realized lately that when certain person can relates to a poem, most times it's downvoted. Maybe because it touches the most sensitive part of the heart.
I love the poem, one of my favorite of yours. Very well done, 5/5, kel.