Stars from the sky

by Ingrid   Jan 3, 2009


So far but yet so near
A woman to me so dear
I hold you in my heart
been there from the start
Touched upon my soul
Your love filled a hole
A craving deep inside
To have by my side
a daughter, a friend
until the very end
I bring you stars from the sky
Want to know why?
Because I love you
my girl, this is true

To my beloved girlfriend dr. Samia M. aka Soso

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A very touching poem Ingrid.
    Well penned!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Samia, I know you have a few more steps to take, but I am calling you doctor already because I believe in you *winks*

    To the girl next door: yes, I loved this young woman from the start, she is the daughter I never had:)

  • 15 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Wow, this is a deep and amazing poem. I like the way your short lines held so much, just like every day spent with a loved one, though not enought time, always full of fun and adventure.

    I hold you in my heart
    been there from the start
    Touched upon my soul
    Your love filled a hole

    I love this part, It is the perfect example of how anyone feels when you first fall in love. Amazing job, 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    Ingrid, you are such a caring soul, what a wonderful tribute to a friend. an excellent ,sweet write!