Ingrid, you are such a caring soul, what a wonderful tribute to a friend. an excellent ,sweet write!

Wow, this is a deep and amazing poem. I like the way your short lines held so much, just like every day spent with a loved one, though not enought time, always full of fun and adventure.

I hold you in my heart
been there from the start
Touched upon my soul
Your love filled a hole

I love this part, It is the perfect example of how anyone feels when you first fall in love. Amazing job, 5/5.

Samia, I know you have a few more steps to take, but I am calling you doctor already because I believe in you *winks*

To the girl next door: yes, I loved this young woman from the start, she is the daughter I never had:)

A very touching poem Ingrid.
Well penned!