by Mr. Darcy
I read this as the rain, specifically the drops as the kisses of a new lover. These kisses breathing new life to a heart that has been without love for so long. A drought if you like? |
by Deana
A beautiful write ,I get a deeper meaning each time I read it. The mood created by your words is serene and yet passionate. I loved it! An excellent piece. |
by NightFlyer
Beautiful! This poem's an unforgettable image of the intricacies and perfection of Nature! |
I actually liked this poem. I must say often i find myself not liking poems on here, but this one created a beautiful image and did not lose it amongst the jargon of poetic emotion. Upon the second reading I could almost smell the rain. Obviously i feel that you could take out a few words, and some other small edits to help the flow, but seriously nice job. I feel that you accomplished your goal "you made the reader revel in the taste/smell of the fresh rain, and you did it with a lively theme. |