Awww i really loved this poem. Love poems are probably my favourite and this was a great one :]
this line:
He took her in his arms, where she found security
^^ i loved this.. its so true. When you are with the one you love, there is so safer place it seems, then his arms.

a beautiful poem :]
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This romantic poem of admiration never missed a beat.Your talent at expressing your emotion is stunning and beyond my ability
plea forgive my lacvk of advice but i can only offer praise

Sweet and touching and yes, sometimes the body language gives away all that the mouth cannot or will not say:)

I love your voice. Your poems are never superficial, my sweet friend:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I agree that body language can say what the mouth doesn't say. You really express your emotion very well in your poems and you never forget to add your romantisicm. This always makes your poems so pleasant to read. This one was so sweet and I must say you are a very talented writer! 5/5

Awww kel this is very romantic how you picture this. Certainly body language is a form of communication in love. Our movement is how we speak and you have depicted tt well in this poem

She looked in her lover eyes and saw the love inside and
Made him show the feelings, he always had to hide

^^^ i like how you laid down these lines

Excellent Job
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Another Eloquent Write, Very Nicely Done!!!

So romantic ^_^

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