I Love You Both

by Fran   Jan 4, 2009


A beautiful day with you.
Laughing as the ocean spray kissed our faces
With it's salty tears.
Walking over the beach,
Our barefeet sinking in the wet sand,
Footprints tracing lovers lost in intimate delight.

I wrote your name in the sand,
Daring the tide to hide my love.
A beautiful day with you.
But still I think of him and sigh.
I love you both, but does my love for him
Dilute my love for you?
Torment.
Isn't love supposed to bring peace?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The second poem I read by you and it also has the sea as an inspiration....maybe you live nea the sea also then?

    To be torn between two lovers is awfull..I do not envy you at all..

    Well written!

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    To love two people is an awful place to be. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nikoshiana

    I can relate to this so muc, sometimes the one true love of our lives stays in our breath forever....

  • 15 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Poets lament over one of lifes many delemas. An old R&B classic said,"Trying to love two, sho ain't easy to do". I guess not.
    Nice poem that looks at the flip side of love, heartache,pain and confusion.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jackie

    An excellent poem Fran, you been reading my mind, lol. The wording was very imaginative, and struck a chord with me.
    5/5

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