Fire (Tyburn)

by Sylvia   Jan 4, 2009


Repeat
Retreat
Deceit
Compete
Flickering flames repeat, retreat, burn
The master of deceit, compete, yearn.

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Tyburn - A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables. The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.
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  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is very interesting style ... I loved the verious poetry forms you try and the versatality with which you come up with beautiful writes in every form...
    would surely try this one ...

    wonderful write...

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Silvia,

    This seems like a difficult format to me.!
    I taste so much bitterness in your words, I think it is about someone you hate or at least dislike very much..
    I have made bitter or angy poems as well in the past, but after a while I deleted them.
    I do not want to hang on to sad or angry feelings, I feel that those things will prove to be insignificant in the end, unless you allow them to possess you.

    A challenging format once again:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yet another form done with ease providing the reader with zest. Love the read as well as the words you have used..good work!

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I enjoy so much your writing. What is beautiful about it, it's the strong meaning behind it. Very well done. Each time by reading your words it motivates me. 5/5, hugs, kel.

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