by TheRevelation Jan 5, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Little pink shoes on her feet, |
by Cara
Wow, that brought a tear to my eye! that was so sad. But it showed immense strength from the young girl.. this was a great poem. The flow and rhyme were very good and i liked how you used speech in your poem. It was really fantastic.. any poem that can make me get teary, has to be well written. This was so good. |