by Steven Topaz Jan 5, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The look in your eye, |
I liked this, although, on the first stanza, you might want to try this, instead of: "The look in your eye" You should try "That look in your eye" For me it seems like the signifigance is easier enterpeted that way, but it won't make a huge difference. |
by Teria
"saying I'm lonely and I'm about to die" |