by Alone in the crowd Jan 5, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I can't sleep knowing that you're out there not thinking of me |
Well Sorry to be quite offensive but I believe that this poem could be quite better....There are some simple errors like Captializing the first letter in each line . Other things are like capitalizing your I's. I like the fact that each of it ends with "To calm my racing thoughts, I think of you" but just add just a little bit more emotion. |