Frozen

by Nicole   Jan 5, 2009


The day is so warm
yet inside I'm ice...
my insides have frozen...fear taken over
My mind swirls in an icy mist..
hoping it is not a return

Already the memories
are eating at me...
threatening to rip me to shreds
threatening my strength.

How can it be so warm... and yet i feel so cold within?
Will i melt in the heat of this day?
Will these thoughts..these daggers kill me?

will the spinning never cease
will the pain never end
will it all be like a nightmare gone so wrong
will it come and claim one more life
will it then turn on me?
or will this emotion kill me first?

I'm trying to find the strength to go trough it again...
but i'm on reserves already...
I fear it will win this time...when suspicions have proof...
we are running out of options for it to be anything else but..

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  • 15 years ago

    by withlove

    Not bad. i like the idea behind it but i think could have organized ur thoughts a little better.
    the last stanza was rly good tho especially the line"when suspicions have proof" dunno why i just liked the sound of that and i like how u didnt finish the sentence in the last line

  • 15 years ago

    by firexflys

    Sadly enough i think we all have memories that will always eat us away... i hope you find peace in this at somepoint in like.. it might take a while to.. great job. 5.5