Aww Ingrid, this was such a good poem!
It was so sad though.. but it was really well written.

A sweet smell of magnolias, so refined
fills his lungs and at last he sees
her appearance as if she is really there
In utter bliss he falls to his knees
^^ My favourite stanza.. very well worded :]

Good luck in the contest!
5/5

Ingrid u have a very creative mind...I mean this poem was like wow... the words that u have painted was so colourful at the begining i didn't thought that the clour would fade that way in the end.It was totally delightful to read;)

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

Sad. We should never wait to talk to one we love or just a friend, because they may not be here the next day or minute to hear what we have to say to them. 5/5

What a sad poem Ingrid, but a delightful one.
I wish he had said how much he loved her, but...too late it seems.
It had good impact, and good imagery.
I liked it.