Ok, i read most of your poems, but this one i have to say was the best. You showed so much pain, and hurt and anger, it seemed like you were seeking for love and laughter, but was used and abused. You wanted to badly to be loved, but yet you were so alone. This is an amaizing poem and is being added to my favorites. If i had at least half your talent. you are a great writer, you dont write to rhyme, you dont write to please, you write to show your in pain, to vent your feelings. This is a great poem. Loved it. 5/5 |