Black Tree

First, you spelled "threw" wrong in this piece, it should be spelled "through" from the way you used it.

"Black Tree
Scorched by lies
Words with fire
That scarred his trunk"

Captivating words, these details are great!

"Thin Branches
Mingle threw each other
Like thoughts confused
Haunting his mind"

Nice simile, this is keeping me reading.

"Dried leaves
Scattered on floor
Like lost hopes
Dead and meaningless"

Another good simile, I love how you talk about the leaves of the tree, not just the tree, you really tell the reader all about him so I can visualize all this.

"Crippled roots
Searching deep threw soil
Trying to find water
Without knowing, it can't be found"

Wow, I am loving this piece, I am just speechless.

"Black Tree
Your hope astounds me
your force empowers me
But your ignorance sickens me"

I love how you write your thoughts on this black tree for the ending. 5/5 from me, a treasure to read upon. Take care!