Just Listen

Breathtaking love poem that clearly shows how you truly feel.

"My heart empty
Everlasting words cut short
My eyes washed out
Tears left permanent trail"

Good descriptions, giving me visuals at what's happening. Also for the fourth line, to me it would sound better if you added an "s" at the end of "trail".

"My soul searching
Happiness beyond reach
My arms empty
Your smell still lingers"

Good wording, this piece captured my heart and soul and drew me in.

"Open up your heart
Open up your eyes
Open up your soul
And guide me to your arms
Baby just listen"

I love how you are just wanting your love to come to you.

"My heart yearns for you
My eyes desire you
My soul incomplete without you
My empty arms calling you"

Well-expressed thoughts, this is clearly straight from your heart. Showing how much this person means in your life and how much you need them.

"Baby just listen
You know its true
Give in to your feelings
I belong to you"

Nice ending, a meaningful love poem. 5/5 from me, take care and keep up the good work!