Very nice free flow with a subtle rhyme here and there I like it. you might want to chech the spelling of "beining" begining?

Very innocent write... capturing the essence of friendship ...

keep writing :)

I trulie love it. this for me has a powerful powerful meaning to me. true friends will stick to the very end n love you no matter what. amazing job trulie. short but it gave a huge messag parami.
love it!
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy