My Two Cents

Love the last stanza made laugh hella hard. love it. :) one of my favorites 5/5

Azzza, waw, i love this. I can relates to this so much. I like the PUN in you, yet you plays with powerful words which hold such strong meanings. My favorite stanza,
"Going certain extend
Rules broken and mends
Enemies just pretend
Fake smiles are send." Sometimes i just observe the so-called friends. Before your presence they put thir best smile on the lips, but behind they are the real grey night monsters. Very well done my friend, kel.

Made me giggle in a good way :}

LOL that was so funny, it really had me cracking up! I think alot of poets need to read this....sometimes all the comments and votes don't mean that the poem is really that great. 5/5

I love this. If you were a female I would call this poem sassy, but ur not so the appropriate word escapes me.
"Ways to gain more fans
Start your own trend
Ratings always a ten
Without seductive scent"
^^^^^^
Funny...I like the way you word this. The fact that the lines are kind've broken up and daon't totally link to one another adds to the tone.

My favorite part is the last stanza. I like how you're saying I'm giving my opionion whether you like it or not...so take it.

GREAT JOB!!