Wow really deep.... Good job. Keep it up.. =)

5/5

Cacye i love it my lil freaky girl!! my favorite part is
~ you called me an angel but stupid boy...
angels can fly and spread joy~
Ah that last line was from looking for alaska?? no wonder it sounded familair!! lol
but 5/5 Cayce keep it up!! which we all know
you will!!

That was good! ^^

Scratches on my arm, so dramatic against my skin.
The bottle of Vodka is empty, guess I win again.
Cigarette ashes and our final good-bye.
Most people smoke to enjoy it. I smoke to die.

2nd line to the 4th line :
i can really relate to that.. i am an alcoholic before but when i met this lady my world turned around and change my life ^^

keep writing you're good in it! ^^

"Angels can fly and they spread joy.
I can't do either.. but I never told..
I wanted to be your angel, the one you would hold. "

^^ loved these lines...
there's so much desperation in those words... to love ...to be loved...and to live ...

beautiful write...
haven't read Looking For Alaska... it seems I have to :)

I really like this. I like I'm sure most others on here can relate to this very much. It was strong, and very well written. I did feel that some of the lines we forced, but over all it was an excellent poem. Great job hun.

Oh wow, dear, that was amazing. My heart was racing, literally, no poem I have ever read has ever done that! Simply, amazing. The last stanza was.. just... wow... haha I don't even have words. I smoke, so this was definately my kind of poem. 5/5