OMG... That is so sad.. Last sentence is so true. You either win or lose. And losing is the hardest thing.

Great job. Keep it up.

5/5

*Danni*

Great work
though you should fix this sentence either cut it or something .."The girl thats so amazing, so gifted, that in my eyes She is the most beautiful girl in the world".

Damn that is so true love is th hardest thing..nice poem:)