Good Work.......

Awww Ingrid you have piece up words so delicately depicting a very touchy poem. I can envision all the pain and suffering that the lady went through loving someone though the person vent out his enmity toward her. I love the twist at the end of it though he vents his anger at her deep in side he alwayz love her... absolutely a fantastic poem...i'm sure u'll win for this;)

What i admire most about your poems, are that by reading most of them it makes us takes a hard look at ourselves. So many of us can relates to a poem like this. Many of us today denies our feelings for the one who loves us. The hardest thing about it, is that, we're not only punishes our ownselves, but the ones who cares about us. I think about this lady in your poem. Unfortunately, she seems to have a tender kind heart and sometimes it can be a big weakness cause at the end there are no returns from the one she loves. very well done my friend. 5/5, kel.

Good job. It is a shame that when we fear something, we lash out at those closest to us and hurt them in the process. 5/5

Wow this poem is really good

Your poem is filled with great imagery Ingrid, and a lesson in the words there for all of us.
Nice write.