This poem is amazing. I haven't read anything like it that has so much emotion in it. Every word hurt to read it. I was almost crying. I wish that you could change everything that has happened to you with words..I wish everyone could do that but the world doesn't work that way. Words don't change anything for the better.

But your words here change people. They make them see what they've always wanted to tell people but have been too afraid to say.

Your words are a great gift. I think that by writing poetry that you are letting people know you. That you are making your own impact.

Great job. 5/5

Wow..
I can't even describe to you how much I could relate to a lot of this. It was well written and an excellent poem!
5/5 Definately!!!!
lly

*~Ally

Wow..this is really good, blew me away

Just a thought in the first stanza you may want to fix the "old" to "told" typo im guessing lol.