Interesting piece, I loved how you expressed your dreams here perfectly. I sort of loved the fact that you repeated you want to be pretty, this stuck out to me because it seems as though that's really what you want. Of course we all want to be pretty and seem perfect, and have those beautiful eyes, ect. I can definatly see where you were coming frm in this poem, and I'm sure a lot of girls could relate.

5/5.

I think all of us can relate to this poem, and that we have all felt this way in some point of our life!
This was my favourite part:
Can I ever be calm;
holding my tongue when I'm mad,