Its hard to tell someone exactly how you feel but you do it effortlessly. It really hurts to feel that you will lose someone knowing that you need them. I read a poem earlier about love and distance and the message in that poem was clear that no matter how far in distance you are apart your never really that far in heart. So do not fear :] 4/5

This is a very sweet poem and youv'e displayed your emotions very nicely into the piece =] Great job