Hehe...i enjoyed reading the poem...somehow u managed to make me smile...short and simple but i liked it :)
keep writting...well done :)

I thought the game reminded me alot of that christmas movie the santa clause. How he just needed to shake the water orb and santa would come. It sucks having someone promise you something only to end up broken hearted. I thought the ending kinda blew it out the water. I imagined that looney toon character yo simmity sam. Way to much Tv for me but this made my imagination jump all over interesting write 3/5

What a clever ending! When i think of shooting stars, i think of the ones you see in the sky, not literally someone shooting them, that was very unique.
I really liked your poem because it was simple and really had a strong meaning behind it. Doesnt it suck when a guy tells you something and it turns out he was just like all the others?
In a whisper that love could see
^^
Such a cleverly written line i felt.

Keep up the great work.
5/5